there’s too much valley here

when the sound of my own breathing reaches my ears

and my skin is warm

and time attaches itself to my brain

vulnerable, i am my most, here

now, inside sheets reeking of aging dreams and dying hope

there’s too much valley here

when do i start climbing?

 

6 thoughts on “there’s too much valley here

  1. Khambule

    Beautiful work.

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  2. […] There’s Too Much Valley Here by V. Naa Takia is a well written post. I found myself drawn to this piece for reasons unknown to me. Some people just know how to write. […]

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  3. when the fruits are ripe 🙂

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  4. Perfect description of my current battle with getting up and just working on my dreams.
    There is too much ocean, I don’t know which direction to swim in

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    1. V. Naa Takia

      Hah! Tell me about it!

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